Having had some audience feedback on the first draft of our film editing, it became evident that the narrative wasn't too clear and therefore uneasy to understand. Having the original idea of a convict escaping prison, using a voodoo doll to murder his victims and then passing his work on to another person appeared to hard to construct successfully so we shall alter it slightly order wise. Using the same shots we will reconstruct the film so that the running order is:
The use of the voodoo doll,
The protagonist being captured (radio announcement and title sequence)
And then his work being continued by someone else.
The reason for doing this is to make it easier to understand, and overall more successful. We hope doing so will increase the effect our film has on its audience.
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